Personal Experience

Personal Experience

Personal Experience Planning and Brainstorming

IALT: plan my ideas for my writing so that I can put the best thoughts into my writing.

First Sentence-the hook: does this make the reader want to read on? The moment I went in the skinny long tower it was very surprised . I was very surprised when I saw a huge tower in front of me. I wonder how a person could build this huge build building

Time words you could use to order your events: Awesome Huge Scary So up in the air

Verbs you could use to describe action: Very fast So crazy So scary looking over the city

Adjectives I could use to add description to my writing: Very high up in the sky Lots of awesome views Scary looking down the window floors

Personal Voice: What thoughts that you’ve had ‘inner thinking’ are you going to record: Omg I’m standing on a glass floor I feel like I’m going to fall! This is so awesome I can see lots of views I think I can rule the world

What similes, metaphors, personification, alliteration are you going to use in your writing? I was so high in the air “like” a bird in the sky It was so tall that it looked “like” big ben