My Sugar Skull

My sugar skull

A few weeks ago I have been trying to complete my artwork called a sugar skull artwork. It is a Mexican tradition to celebrate dead people that where special to you. It is a very bright and colourful artwork piece. Here is what my sugar skull.

   

Personal Experience

Personal Experience

Personal Experience Planning and Brainstorming

IALT: plan my ideas for my writing so that I can put the best thoughts into my writing.

First Sentence-the hook: does this make the reader want to read on? The moment I went in the skinny long tower it was very surprised . I was very surprised when I saw a huge tower in front of me. I wonder how a person could build this huge build building

Time words you could use to order your events: Awesome Huge Scary So up in the air

Verbs you could use to describe action: Very fast So crazy So scary looking over the city

Adjectives I could use to add description to my writing: Very high up in the sky Lots of awesome views Scary looking down the window floors

Personal Voice: What thoughts that you’ve had ‘inner thinking’ are you going to record: Omg I’m standing on a glass floor I feel like I’m going to fall! This is so awesome I can see lots of views I think I can rule the world

What similes, metaphors, personification, alliteration are you going to use in your writing? I was so high in the air “like” a bird in the sky It was so tall that it looked “like” big ben

Multiple Intelligences (Grenade)

Mining For Ya Minecraft Parody

    (Grenade Bruno Mars) By Jiwon & Lissie

Open the door, outside my house, just heading to the mine, to mine some stuff. Getting iron getting some gold, but that's not want we want, ohh we want diamond we want coal. Mining near bedrock, I can hear lava nearly burning through the floor. Blocking the source with lots of cobblestone, trying to stop the flow. I’m mining for yah. Risking my life for yah. I’m really trying for yah. But you want do the same. I’ve been mining day and night, to try and find you emerald. Mine, mine, mine that's all I ever do. I want to go outside this mine to see the sunshine. Just heading up the stairs to see the light. I haven’t seen you in so many different years. I don’t think anyone would care. I want you to appreciate the things that I do just for you. I'm mining for ya risking my life for ya. I'm really trying for ya. I've been really mining all day and night when, I just saw your face. I was crying in happiness.

!HERE IS THE ACTUAL SONG!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xb1qfyymr_Q

Football

Football

A few days ago we did football. It was really fun because it was using 4 balls. I really liked kicking the ball. It was also a good weather so I was very sweaty. I enjoyed the game even thought we lost by 1 point. I really wish we played the game again with our teacher.

S.S.R

Today I read a book called The run away dinner. It was a fiction. The story is when there was a boy called Banjo Cannon. His mum gave him a sausage for dinner and the sausage ran away. The sausage called all the foods around the neighbourhood. The story is written by Allam Ahlberg
It is a very wired story.Here is the book cover.

My Invention

For my topic I decided that I would made a sushi out of clay. The reason I wanted to make this was because my auntie owns a sushi shop. Also my dad works there. I also love crafting and making new things. So from home I will bring my clay to school.                                                                                                                                                                      

Book review.

Simple Book review outline

Introductory paragraph

1. Book title and author: Wild life ,Alicia ponder Peter friend
2. Main idea of story: Three monkey and a zebra wants to go to a different place because there are too many mosquitose in that place
3. Main characters in the book: Violet, Bumpkin, Nutkin, Eddie, Hyacinth, Brian
4. something unique and interesting about the story/book for readers to know: The monkeys and zebra put on a fake horn.

Body paragraph 1-plot

1. Main idea of the story/book: Violet, Bumpkin, Nutkin, Brian wants to go to a different place because there are too many mosquitoes
2. Where does the story take place: A wild jungle
3. When does the story take place: In our days
4. Something unique about the time/place in which the story takes place and how it affects the characters: It’s summertime and mosquitoes bites the monkeys and zebras and humans

Body paragraph 2-characters

1. Main characters in this story/book:  Violet,  bumpkin, Nutkin, Eddie, Hyacinth, Brian
2. Does something important or meaningful to the story happen to a between characters? Describe it in one sentence: When the three monkeys and a zebra said they had horns

Body paragraph 3-review

1. Favourite part of the story/book and why: When the animals all took their horns off and say its fake.
2. What do you think about the way it was written? Good and thoughtful
3. Do you think other kids would enjoy reading this book and why? Yes because its funny and also it is weird

Conclusion paragraph

1. Was the story/book entertaining, educational, amusing, stc., and why? The story was a bit weird because the animals could talk
2. Why did you enjoy/not enjoy reading this story/book? I enjoyed this book because there are lots of funny characters
3. Would you recommend other kids to read this book? Yes of course